tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-969797984440298030.post5944122052864777195..comments2023-08-05T21:52:58.701+05:30Comments on ताना बाना: मंदिर मंदिर धोक खाता रहागोविंद गोयल, श्रीगंगानगर http://www.blogger.com/profile/04254827710630281167noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-969797984440298030.post-72514110057103778632010-03-14T13:13:41.178+05:302010-03-14T13:13:41.178+05:30bahut achhi kavita hai ,,,,,,, par aakhiri line me...bahut achhi kavita hai ,,,,,,, par aakhiri line me aap nasha utar gaya... ke sthaan par "nasha jata raha" likhte to ,,,aap ki kavita lay na khoti .manish.misrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01634807270976860613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-969797984440298030.post-73297454946788690832010-03-14T09:32:36.856+05:302010-03-14T09:32:36.856+05:30aaj ka sach ye hee hai gardish me to saya bhee sat...aaj ka sach ye hee hai gardish me to saya bhee sath nahee deta............<br />shubhkamnae..........Apanatvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07788229863280826201noreply@blogger.com